Lolz.

This ain't half-bad. I like the melodies you used. I, however, don't like how that "weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrroooo" synth simply dissapeared without notice, but now its back and its pretty cool, :P

This actually sounds like trance, lol, barely, but it does. I don't like that last key you used on that "weeeeeereroooo" melody, the very last one, just leave it at the same key right before that one. The percussion ain't bad.

Good job i guess. Need to add more melodies though, that one "weooooorooooo" melody's getting annoying, :P

8/10.

not bad.