i dont make music but....

i heard your song telling AUDIO MAKERS to reveiw your work. well im not a song maker YET (saving up for a synchronizer. n e way, this peaice in particular, i felt like the intro melodie was too short(not enough keys used) and the actual song melodie is like a desperate attempt to create a melodie. my suggestion, spend more time finding melodies, the beat is perfect(timing nd all) but the melodie ruins it with its desperatness sounding keys.

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NaL3s