0:07 reminds 1st "whirlpool"

to long intro needs a stronger beat

you should have kep the tnro loop to maybe once or twice through then brought in heavier back beat but otherwise cool song

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Nice job =D

Nice job once again man. Again this song is a little repetitive and you should definitely work on adding more sounds(and drums) to your songs to make them a little less repetitive. Overall you did good job and it sounds pretty good. Keep it up. :D

very trancey beginning

I like the syth. When you bring in the snare roll, it is about 10X too loud... turn it down a bit =(

Other than that the rest of the song is good. You just need to expand on the drums and the synthwork a bit, and you'll be a winner =)

Keep it up the good work! Could you drop by my audio page and drop me a review or two? I'd appreciate it =D