A bit repetitive for VG music. I really liked the buildup, but I have trouble figuring out where it would really fit in a game. Perhaps a late-game stage in a futuristic shooter?
As some have said, the 8 bit sounds don't seem to fit quite well with the other instruments. The mood that was being built before it was quite different, in my opinion, than what was accomplished in the end.

An okay song, but I do not sound mixed with 8/16 bit audio.
I was hoping for a heavy electro kick, sure the song has videogame tank.
If you had a kick drum in the song it would raise the song a lot more than you think.

Intro okay that I like. The song itself is pretty boring without any power or something crazy. song has potentional it needed a little more work and time, I think.,
Work at the music patience gives good results.

Sounds a bit like modern pop/rap (the radio stuff) to me. That's not necessarily a bad thing! I was a bit disappointed when a heavy kick didn't appear, though. The song was craving some sort of drop, but it seemed to simply hold tension the entire time.

I feel you are still on to something here, but it needs some work.