Project Ravestein -WIP-

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Project Ravestein -WIP-

Author Comments

So yeah, I consider this to my -serious- category mainly for the track, mainly because I didn't throw at you a quick track fastmade in 20 minutes (like I usualy do and thats why I upload so much stuff and why 90% of it sucks balls :D)

I want to make the best track ever this time, so here goes a WORK IN PROGRESS!
Show me your support guys! Do you want me to complete this?! Do you want to share some ideas for the track with me? Well if you do, write me a nice essay or a simple review :D

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Lich

2013-02-03 18:33:17

I'll be interested to see how this turns out once you have finished it.

DESHIEL responds:

I was thinking about a geting a guy with a real guitar to cover some parts for me ;D

Anchorwind

2013-02-02 10:47:48

"Do you want me to complete this?!" Sure. The intro was a bit long for me, but once :52 kicked in, I was with you. I hope that your kicks have more balls in your completed work, but you've got a good start.

DESHIEL responds:

more balls? Or more DB? :D

kmh654

2013-02-02 09:56:16

It has a good beat and rythm, but I wouldn't say this is your best.

DESHIEL responds:

What is my best?! :D

Aaroca

2013-02-02 01:50:20

I think that this is good.
However, it could do with a little more flavour.
Add another instrument to emphasise the "Rave" element.
You've got the "Stein" part down to a 'T' though.

-Aaroca-
"Possibly a guitar of some sort?" suggested The Other Other God

DESHIEL responds:

Stop stealing my goddamn thoughts directly from my goddamn brain!
Althought I'm glad that I'm not the only one seeing a guitar add as a possibility.

Kajenx

2013-02-01 22:25:48

Your mixing is pretty good, but the songwriting doesn't match up, really. I'd say try to organize it a little better.

DESHIEL responds:

Ye I'm still bad at both ;)