It needs more.
I'm giving you a 7/10 because the talent and recognition of genre is there, but I don't feel like this is a true techno song. It has no progression really and it needs a good bass, this is just more like like a techno synth piece that could be incorporated into a greater song. That and at the end of it gets a bit dodgy, I don't know if it was intentional but I feel it skips too much. Other then that criticism, you're quite talented and I can't wait until I hear more of your works.
I still have the whole thing stored as flp. so future incarnation could be possible.
Thing is that when I've made this one. I didn't realy know much about the program that I used for its creation.
Anyway thanks for the comment :)
I hope your next thousand lyrics are as good as this
Now that you've developed a good beat, I'd like to hear some melody. Maybe test with some melodies for your next "training"?
If this is training, I'd love to see what you make after you train.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.