I like this

Wow I have to say for an "OLDER-PIECE" this was still pretty goo I love the "BUILD-UP" on this so it does have a nice progressive sound and the build up is amazing I think you should ad some fade out and even build that element up even more, but anyways really nice work here.

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I think you should ad some fade out and even build that element up even more

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All right! Like the climactic nature of it, and the harmonies/melody at :45, but some of the instruments you used felt a little out-of-place, especially the one at 1:23. A lot of the instruments felt a little bizarre to me, although I do like the mood of the piece and the unique style. Despite its being a loop, I didn't think it looped very well- it's possible that this is simply a short song, you know :) Anyway, I don't know if this is just me, but I thought I heard an accelerando leading into 1:23, which I didn't think added a lot to the piece. Sorry to be tough on you. It's not bad, just incomplete...you should keep working on it. :)

Not bad. Let me start by pointing out that you're in the wrong Genre. This is Dance, not DnB. Might wanna fix that soon lol,

Now, judged as a dance song, you have solid chords, and I'm using the love of filters in here. It sounds pretty happy-ish to me, as it's really melodic. This could DEFINETLY use a bit of mastering, and the bass could be worked on. Try to experiment with the mixer a bit more, if you use FL Studio. I dont know if you were going for a sub bass, but drop that one octave lower, if you were.

7/10
3/5

-Ikarus Hakurei

PS, stop by my new song, and check it out, maybe?