Heard the first few seconds and thought "Hmm...not bad. Needs a kicker though." then 1:38 rolls around and I'm just O_O...okay, that works! That bumped the rating from 4.5 to 5, I kid you not and the timing was perfect. This is a piece that takes me someplace.

The thrums of a deep bass almost encourage me not to go into the loud, but incredibly large club named the Cube in futuristic 2138 Chicago. Decked in black from head to toe I move to the bar where I get mixed drink. My ears slowly get adjusted to the pace and bass of the music, and as I look around that's when I see...her. Dressed in a simple casual black dress with black hair tied in a ponytail she looks my way. Deep blue eyes entrance me and our eyes lock as everything else seems to fade into a near mute background. She blushes slightly and gives a small smile as she makes her way to the second floor. Screw drinking at the bar, I'm following her. She seems to know I'm following her but she doesn't change her pace as she toys with me, weaving in and out of groups of people to almost throw me off her trail. As I get up from the stairs and onto the second floor I turn and she suddenly has her arms wrapped around me, locking me in a deep kiss. No words, no introductions, just that one moment. At least for now.

Hope you enjoyed the short story. Keep cranking them out.