I liked this song, I just feel that it could use more polish. Now don't get me wrong, when I say polish, I don't mean in the actual sound of the guitar. The sound is very raw and complements the overall tone of the song.

What I mean is that the transitions between each riff in the song could have been handled better. While the song (I think) is supposed to give off that confusing vibe, there's a difference between confusing and jarring, and that is what each transition is.

There are times in the song where there's a riff going and it just randomly changes without any rhyme or reason. One way to fix this would be to make each riff flow into the next, like slowly changing the tune of the guitar into the next riff or gradually gaining pace into another. That would make the song flow much more smoothly and make the song sound more cohesive and less jarring.

3/5

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