Acting[50/50]
I think no one can comprehend how many tongue twisters you used.. That is so dang impressive you either have a really good tongue to avoid slipping up, or you practised the shit out of that, now that's commitment.

Range[20/25] - despite your amazing acting, you did have a few similarities in your voice, mainly the telemarketer and the guy at the sheet sweater warehouse

Fit[24/25]
Everyone's fit was perfect.. although the customers did sound a bit retarded.. probably intended for comedic effect

Mixing [19/20]
your mixing is perfect, crystal clear voices and great sound effects that aren't to loud or quiet

Originality[14/15]
I don't even know what to write...

Writing[12/15]
Although your story is simple, I see what you did here.. all your lines were simply set-ups for tongue twisters

Final Score: 139/150

I felt like I was listening to a Doctor Seuss story. xD

Great job on the voice acting, and the (correctly enunciated) alliteration. I think this might get a pretty good rating in the contest. Great job, and good luck!

Oh wow. Perfect everything! The script is fan-tas-tic. Alliteration is such a funny and clever theme, plus you add a few other small humorous bits to make it special, like the "wait for it..." Each character sounds vastly different from the next. The duration is perfectly concise and the background sound design was constructed so effectively. And such control of voice! You sound as if you've had years of practice and rehearsal beforehand. I'm just amazed at the harmony and balance this has. Bravo! Wonderful job!

A sly script, scribed by a sudden superstar; your swiftly spouted sibilants were simply superb. Excelsior!

Love this! Props to articulating all those S words! XD