It seemed like a decent enough song, a lot better than anything I've ever been able to make myself, anyway. It kept a really nice rhythm the entire way through, but I can't say I'm in favor of the change of pace at 00:42. It seemed too quick to change, and I would recommend easing into the next phase of the song next time.
Other than that, it seems to be put together in a reasonable fashion. The beat is okay, and I don't really have any complaints other than the one listed. While this isn't one of those songs that really gets me going, and sends chills down my spine, it is definitely good. Keep it up, and you will get better, friend.
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