I really enjoyed this piece! It's calm, yet moving. Perfectly balanced. Definitely deserves a five stars.

Lyrics for those who were wondering:

You break the wall down and you
turn your back on the builders
the wall returns to the state it was
before you heaved the boulders
cementing on the other side
the meaning of your life
the radiator's been shut down
and i've been sealed in ice

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

The opening to this song is really awesome! The song is not bad, but rests very heavily on the acapella, and unfortunately I'm not too convinced by the work in this song that is entirely your own, which is the reason for the slightly lower score. Some of the FL presets I’m hearing dont sound so good to my ears. Other sound design is pretty good though! Score: 6

Mini-scores (Note: See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)

* Mixing: 3/4
* Composition: 2/4
* Arrangement: 3/4

This is like an electric world! Love it! Can you please tell me the lyrics?

Awesome work poinl!! Just pure genius really :D:
Loved the way you opened the song that pan flute sounds incredibly soothing to the ears, and loved that melody. When you start building up the song I understood that something awesome coming. Really good use of vocal cuts. the transition at 0:30 was almost perfect :).
The part at 0:55 got me to groove in my chear XD. Absolutely loved the melody. One of the sweetest things I've heard :).
You're a pure genius when it comes to keeping the listeners attention. The part at 2:11 was absolutely crazy good! I was thinking that you would probably repeat the parts all over again, but you really surprised me with that one. The way you brought the main part back in again at 2:37 was just awesome :).

Onlycomplain I really can come with is that I feel like the kick could use a few higher frequencies just to make it a bit more punchier. That's barely noticeable though X3.¨

Overall a great track, which definetly deserves 5 stars and a follow :)
Thx for requesting a review fron the Review Request Club :).

-Ectisity
{Review Request Club}

I liked this a lot! You used the vocals very well!