Cool stuff. I would really work on finalizing your mix. There are a few parts where it just sounds cluttered.
I like the rest of the song though. keep working at it.
FYI, I uploaded a new song. woot woot.
~ Byca
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So about this - its really a preview - unlike the other one, this one "will" be finished, and I hope you anticipate that. Once again its a progressive track. ( Note: by finished I mean after a while - Im busy doing other remixes ) *Framework
PRO-GRESS
Please - review - ( its one of the ways I get better )
if u think u like it - fan, pm, fav, do wht you can.
Awkward transitions bro. You gotta make 'em flow! pffft.
Looks like we got another potential trance artist here. I seriously recommend having a main theme for your song. At the moment, all I hear are arpeggios and a few stabs and a bass. That's stuff is for goa man. You gotta have a chord progression here. You also got to watch out for too much release on your instruments/pads. They muffle your track. Also, make your bass more powerful than it is, but not too much.
Listen to the pros for learning out to make better transitions. you have a few off things in there too.
'Neways, cool stuff. I make trance too -- maybe check 'em out? I hate asking to but it seems to be the only way to get exposure around here now.
Thanks man. Peace.
Pulsar013 responds:
Duude - Im super sorry - this track I started -and was like "yeah!" one night - and then the next I was thinking " y the heck did i submit this?", u feel. And yeah this is some sucky work really - but thanx for the review - be sure to check out my remix once its done - OH and Ill def - look for out for u - I think ive already heard some of yer stuff. ( I admit - It did sound goa - BUT IF freakin programers would hurry up and let me delete this - I wouldnt have my name being sullied)
I enjoyed this, it was a bit repetitive but it is electronica. The ending there was kind of abrupt and the drum work a tad dry. Other than that, I'd add a sub bass underneath it all to get the lower register while being subtle. Good job!
Pulsar013 responds:
Thanx - glad you said that - everything is already underway - essentially what this is = is a rough draft - the sounds will change - even though it is long and repetitive with small changes, and the ending is supposed to be abrupt, since this isnt the full ending - its only the preview. But Ill def. take ur advice - keep it comin.
not so sure if its progressive-sounding. its rather 'trance', in general meaning that is.
the pad/leads youre filtering into the song sound trousy. -a mixture between trance and house.
there also is 1 MAJOR instrument/sound you forgot, or havent added yet, which is a proper deep or low bass. i assume a low is easier but do as you whish.
i just cant see any live in a song without one.
the pluck melody is pretty. not much to say about
and try not to overdo the hi hat(s), i mean they're in there for almost 3 minutes straight
just trying to say i need a proper buildup towards whatever you are planning -breakdown, klimax, breakbeat you name it :)
and yeah i know this is a PRO-GRESS,
i wont vote this as a full song lol, makes sense right xD.
unless you plan to update it anytime soon....
Pulsar013 responds:
Dude - Im gald u said that - I thought the same thing - the pad Is really HOUSY - I was thinking on changing it myself - These earphones I got - make the bass so powerful I have to lower the frequency sometimes, yeah that synth needs some more power. I know Im trying to fix the hi hats repetition - thanx for ur input dude - keep it comin.
Awesome song. I really like it man.
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