I just thought of a feather falling slowly through the light of the moon. A chilly, breezy night. The music was the breeze, flowing. Short, but nostalgic. Interesting. Thank you.
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I MADE A REMAKE OF THIS SONG. GO CHECK EET OUT.
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I made this today, I hope you enjoy it. Currently thinking up a short story for it. :)
I am going to add my song "Lasting Hope" to this piece. :) I wasn't able to today since I need to get on my father's computer to put it together. I will do so soon. Stay tuned. :)
Please forgive my short pieces. > <
My computer won't allow me to make a piece very long or else it freezes up. > <
Once I get a better computer, things will be different and my songs will be longer. I will also be able to use better programs, resulting in better quality. ^ ^
AshleyAlyse responds:
Very interesting imagery. :) I recently made another version of this song, if you would like to check it out! ;) Thank you very much! I can't make any music right now since my computer broke a few months ago, but I will definitely make more when I have the chance and get a new computer! :3
You know a track is good when you freak out cause' it stops just when it's about to get bigger.=)
Short or not, this is a gorgeous, swelling and sweeping piece you've written here. Love the chord progression throughout the whole thing and, if there is more too it, I can only imagine what the track sounds like as a whole!
Hope that new computer comes around soon because we must have more!=)
AshleyAlyse responds:
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you like it! :D I would really love to finish this song once I have the chance to. Sadly, it's probably going to be a while since I'm too sickly to keep a job at zee moment, but maybe I'll be lucky, who knows. :) Thanks again!
ooo me likey, very smooth transitions and meaningful sound progression. I thought I could almost hear a woman singing in the background is that you or am I hearing stuff? Ended rather abruptly but I'm sure you know that already. I'm the king of abrupt endings so I can't fault you for that. Keep up the great work!
AshleyAlyse responds:
Well, look who it is! :D Nah, it's just a little female choir refill I found. I should probably turn it up a little so it can be heard better. I really appreciate you taking the time to review my music. Thank you so much! Can't wait to hear your next submission! :)
not bad!
i think that if you added some dynamics to this it would give it a little more flare, and also make it sound a little more real, rather than being made with FL Studio or some similar program.
5/5 9/10 nice work! :)
-Alex
AshleyAlyse responds:
Unfortunately, I am too poor to afford a good program at the moment. I have to stick with my Dell Penitium 4 and download programs online. XD Someday I hope to get a better computer and such so I may make better music. :) Thank you for your review! :D
Beautiful!
Your work is amazing!
AshleyAlyse responds:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my work! :)
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