Um..
The first minute or so is very irritating but I guess if you can stand the first minute or so it's pretty bouncy and catchy. Very nicely done for a WIP though.
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EDIT: I posted a full version of this song, go check it out
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/466859 (delete the spaces in the link, if any)
DJDela responds:
Hey thanks for the review.
But, I posted a never version of this song, so I'd appreciate if you listened to it, because it sounds much better, and it's not annoying at the beginning.
"tap tap tap"
the very beginning 15 seconds getting into the song with the "taptaptap" is just too.. strong. its loud and gets annoying, making me want to kind of turn the song off before i could even get real far into it to hear the actual music. but then it gets somewhat better. 7-10
DJDela responds:
Too loud, are you kidding me?
Just see what the spectrum looks like.
Something must be wrong with your headphones, because I've done my best to master and equalize this song, so nothing is clipping (or too loud).
Clean and Smooth
Very nice music techy electronical and perfect beats but the thing that got this a little ruined was at 2:00 the metal music starts but overall great music
DJDela responds:
Yea, I know, I'll try to fix it in the full version.
Thanks
i come to listen every now and then :D
Overall a solid song. The part from 1:00 onward is the strongest. Very nice sound, good harmonies, surprising 7th chord (I think? I know what you did there, I just don't know if it's called that).
You are kinda right about the post 2:00 part being like another song. If you make the chords return to the ... uhm, tonica (in english too?!) you know the main chord, every now and then, you would draw a stronger connection between the parts.
My main complaint would be the bassline in the starting part. You should scratch or redo that, it's harmonically off, but not in a good way.
Full score for sound, points off for harmonics. I'd like to hear this as a refined complete track though!
cheers!
DJDela responds:
The bassline at the begging might be changed, but just slightly, I don't hear what's wrong with it though.
Maybe this time some "offharmony" is good. :P
This is just like a preview so the part at @2:00 will continue with that melody again so that it draws connection just like you said.
Thanks for the review.
very good
like you said it is a diffence at 2.00 but you still should like it it helps the song by putting a little change in it if i find out how to make music im 12 so i don't know much but there are alot of great artists here keep goin yhis the awsome
DJDela responds:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it
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