Needs some work

This song has plenty of low end and a good melody... That's if you can hear it over the bass. The bass end is too high in this to really hear anything other than what sounds like a snail farting. I would love to see this fixed and hear a new copy of it because it does seem like it has some real potential for something great. Keep up the work! I wouldn't mind helping you out if you need it just drop me a PM. I believe
in you big guy!