You've got a pretty nice beat going on here. But it feels a bit... unfinished, you know? I'd add more synth, maybe make the melodies more complex. It also needs a bassline! Right now it seems like the melody is the only thing holding it together.
It's kind of like the first draft of a great novel- there are just some things missing, and it needs a bit of editing.
Choice of sounds is cool, but...
This is a cool idea, but I think...what you need is a more defined set of percussion and a clearer bassline. Right now, the majority of the song is relying on melody and the mixing is a bit messy, so what I'd suggest is lowering the main instruments right now, and EQing the drums to make room for a more prevalent bassline and percussive groove.
Thanks will do. I'll PM you when I'm done :3
I mean its a good concept but there's something lacking
Do you mean an extra bassline all over or just in the melody?
PM me and thanks for helping.