Tell me what I need to re-do, don't just say it is bad, tell me how I can make it BETTER! Thanks for listening and Thanks for helping me improve.
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You've got a pretty nice beat going on here. But it feels a bit... unfinished, you know? I'd add more synth, maybe make the melodies more complex. It also needs a bassline! Right now it seems like the melody is the only thing holding it together.
It's kind of like the first draft of a great novel- there are just some things missing, and it needs a bit of editing.
Choice of sounds is cool, but...
This is a cool idea, but I think...what you need is a more defined set of percussion and a clearer bassline. Right now, the majority of the song is relying on melody and the mixing is a bit messy, so what I'd suggest is lowering the main instruments right now, and EQing the drums to make room for a more prevalent bassline and percussive groove.
Thanks will do. I'll PM you when I'm done :3
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I mean its a good concept but there's something lacking
Do you mean an extra bassline all over or just in the melody?
PM me and thanks for helping.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
EwaSC 
