Good, good...

First of all, loved the intro. It's got a great hook.

Starting at :34 and onto about :50, I feel like this section could us some work. I feel like it doesn't flow very well, and the note choices aren't all that interesting, either.

Everything from there does flow very nicely, though. I love how the (flute?) comes in. Everything just ends up fitting together very well.

Hope I helped :).

(I also feel like a distorted guitar would ruin this piece, but that's just my $.02.)