HOLY COW this is amazing kinda reminds of obscurity by nh22 (nighthawk22) I mean its good needs

No improvement at all

SOLID!

SOLID idea!!!

Very very nice, it was strange and atracting. The way made the melody treble and stutter was awsome, it contributed to the songs overall feel.

THe melody was very good, relaxing, sensual add that with the semi-DnB beat you made... Awsome :)

Really sends you into space :)

Critisism:
Make it loop better :P

Advice:
1: Maybe you can add background, something like a light, slashy loop or maybe just a pad. But it had to be something that wont stick out to much, just a mooder, or the song will lose it's overall ambientish-ness

2: MAKE IT LONGER!!! I WANT MOOOOORE!!!! :)

You get a 5/5 on this one :)

Cyaz
DarkAngel out...