Good, but could be better..
The intro was very nice, and I'm not a musician so I can't say for sure what should have happened at 1:07 instead of it launching into that drum stuff, but I think it would have been a lot better if you had kept it low key with just the pads with maybe some new tiny tunes and tweaks here and there throughout, but no huge advances.
I think everything goes downhill at 1:07, the beat is very nice but it just doesn't feel right after such a calm melodic intro.
Hope you don't mind the criticism, the song is still good, but for me personally it could have been a lot better if you'd have played around with some more ambient pads and tunes :)
Keep it up ^^
I would definately pay for your work.
I couldn't ask for more
The intro, the ambiance, the dialogue, the rising of the melody through the song to then fade back to an ending similar to the beginning.
I can't ask for more than this!
This is the essence of music. This is brilliance. Perfection! 20/10 stars mate, the best I've heard in a while.
Listening to it and...
The inclusion of dialogue at the opener is nice, i like the soft chourus and the bells but the snare seems a little flashy for a drum part. The slide change to the chorus in the middle is a nice touch and the drop down to just the snare part is great. Now i see why you kept it so prominant the whole time, i love the almost pianississimo at the end and the slow wind noises add great effect. All around a great tune, keep rollin em out and i'll keep listening!
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