its nice

Please do not bother the rediulously low score you have there.
There are bastards that zero bomb everything they can get their hands on.
a 5/5 from me.
Very nice progression, good sidechaining. House worthy imo.

Just keep practicing and eventually even the zero bombers will bow for what you make. Im talking in experience, it'll be allright :P.

Greets,
PotencY