Went back and changed the melody to a piano....
Any better?
well done
The rhythm is more bold forward in the way it sounds, its improved for certain. But the ending - the fact that it held as a soft tone for a few seconds was a sign of change in the rhythm not the ending (at least to me it was). still well made, its definitely better than my music.
yeh i didnt really work that hard on it, so believe me when this becomes full length that part will definatly change for sure.
THIS IS ok!...
Nice work! Keep it UP!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
MrAlbino07 
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