Getting better...

But still a long way to go. The song needs to vary a bit more otherwise it just becomes dull so try not to use the same MAIN sound sample through out the entire song. Need to put EVEN a bit more effort into it... I also see that you're starting to play a bit with the effects. Good... now you just need to blend them in a more disguised way. Good effort. Keep going.

try this

hey speed it up like so its really quick and make it blend or sommoth it out so its not choppy and add like tht hi pitched continuing syth in the background then itd be seriously the coolest song. but good job keep it up, give it a shot