Very Good
Great song, enough said but it is a bit short. If you weren't thinking about extending it you could've at least made it a loop.
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hi there im still using demo versions but now im using the fl 10 demo :D this song ....... holy crap i hate it for some some reason i am completely lost with it i like were it went so far but i have no idea of what to do with it any suggestions would be greatly appreciated or if someone wants the fl file to mess with it themselves that works too
decoyultimatum responds:
it says wip if you can see that :) im not done with this at the end it just kinda stops cause i didnt have time to finish it
Love this
this is awesome dude nice beat and good vibe and nice leads please check out some of my music :)
Bass?
The bass was probably the thing I liked most about this piece. The intro, starting at 0:12 when the bass lead comes, is when the piece actually started for me. I wasn't a huge fan of the drums or beginning bass.
I liked the...not sure what you'd call it at the end, around 1:04..Arpeggio? I think it fits well as a trance song, yet..it lacks the trance feel. When I think of trance I think of somewhat ambient pads played being covered and supporting the smooth leads with a drum beat that's a bit faster and holds my attention.
Definitely not bad for a WIP though, and has potential. I can definitely see this working as BiviZ said, for flash games and what not. Just finish up the end with the arpeggio. Right now it's a little awkward.
8/10
5/5
decoyultimatum responds:
ya right now im at a stale mate with this piece ill probably get back to it in a month i that arpeggio you were talking about yes it was an arp and it was a miracle i almost didnt think of it but once i did that was when i went brain dead so i squeezed it out and set it aside
Potential.
Dat demo have so many potential for example, for games. Like i dunno SHIFT or TIMEFCUK, i think.
Btw great idea for demo :3
Im appreciate you
:)
decoyultimatum responds:
thanks its supposed to be more of a game loop type of thing im glad you came to that conclusion i guess that means im doing it right :)
Fived it!
Sounds a bit like your earlier track. Really love the melody of the higher pitched synth. The bass is however sounding a bit rough. I'd recommend you change it with another one. Apart from that, it's coming along nicely. Nice SFX too! Can't wait until it's finished :)
decoyultimatum responds:
this song started of me trying remake live (my old song i made but my program crashed) i would understand if it sounded similar to it i was making it like my old one but it then started to grow a personality of its own and it ended up sounding to different to be the same song but i got stuck and didnt know where to go with it :( thx for the review btw
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