A work in progress I assume, though still nice!

Song flow is pretty solid, riffs are smooth, guitar tones are tight! The only part that felt "off" was at 2:20. I know the scoop was used for effect but I felt like there was a bit too much overdrive at that point.

You're also getting some "pick noise" from the guitars at certain points (more noticeable towards the 2:30 ending part). I'd say bring the treble down on the guitars.
Also when you record the guitars get into the habit of alternate picking flat up and down as picking the strings at an angle will cause some serious pick noise

Oh yes, and the guitars at 2:30 during the quick palm mute sections seemed just a tad phased, it's not that bad but if you wanted to perfect it, I'd look at fixing up those points.

The only other thing which really bugged me were the overheads on the kit throughout the song, especially the china during the intro. They sounded really harsh and distracting. Try running them through a hi-pass filter and playing around with the EQ a bit.

Loved the reversed clean guitar intro with the synth, very soothing. Even when the distortion guitars kicked in it still worked great. Just fix those overheads dude and you'll be good to go!

Hope my opinion can help refine your song even more, just keep working it, I know the final product will be totally awesome!

- Zac