LOL - Needs some better acting though.

CURRAAAZZZIER than usual. HIlarious writing man. Although, he really didn't necessarily sound anything like the joker. I always have enjoyed your writing, and laugh at many of your simple voice acting skits. The only thing I recommend working on is the acting, perhaps adding a little crazy laughter in there in order to get attached to the character. When voice acting, I always try to make it to where I actually do feel like the character does. For example, if the character is angry I start to get FURIOUS. If he is crazy I start to laugh maniacally. If he is being punched I punch myself in the stomach (lol)

So yeah, work on your acting but your writing is great!

Not bad, but still needs something

I think that there is huge potential here - the voice needs working on just a little, to make it slightly more ragged and "edgy", just helping to portray Ledger's infamous villain. Ragged breathing in the pauses could help, as could making it ever so slightly deeper, which would help the darker sides of the piece.

With the music, you've got a nice piece there, but I would ask that you turn that down, as it drowns out the vocal work in places and since that's what we want to look at primarily, no offence to the musician, you need to look at that. With the way that the dramatic pause was flanked by the raise in volume. That worked well. Getting there, but it just needs a little more, IMO.

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Funny

Oh yes, I remember the original l version and even left a review for it some time ago,

I think the redux version with the added music is a lot better. I don't want to say the original was bad, I just like this version better.
The music adds some nice dramatic atmosphere to this piece that was somehow missing in the first version you uploaded.

Also, the text is still funny. "Why so hungry, son?"

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Great job !

Can u give me the lyrics ? i wanna make a FILM OF THISSS !!!!!!

Hilarious

I like how instead of a scar he got fat instead because of it. Also very nice and chilling music. "Why so hungry?" Like how you kept making it dramatic and forcing him to become extremely fat as well. The background music was quite fitting though and I really liked it.

The voice acting was sound as well, sounds extremely good, although you could have made your voice sound a bit harsher. Aside from that it was very nice and funny as well.

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