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Fabricated Son (Final Mix)

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Uploaded
Sep 22, 2010 | 1:51 AM EDT
File Info
Song
4.8 MB
5 min 17 sec
Score
3.82 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.82 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
845 Plays | 42 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
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Author Comments

Its time to let this one go, after lots and lots of time working on this one I made a final mix
after getting some great reviews and advice/feedback on the last version I put up.
I hope you enjoy it. The lyrics are right below.
--Jesse--
Sept 22,2010,

Fabricated Son
Words and music written and performed by Jesse Sicinski ©2010

They're going to text you a message,
Sent down from corporate satellites,
"You better tune in on Sunday,
If you want to see something really cool"
This viral message circled twice around the globe,
Infecting everyone around,
And so we gathered by the pixelated glow,
With burning curiosity,

Run, run, run, cause the fabrics come undone,
With the setting of the sun, we're all going down,
So everybody run cause the end's about to come,
Soon the fabricated son will be knocking at your door,
They synthesized our own demise in the image of a desecrated saviour,
So hypnotized by this disguise, on and on his slaves are lined up for confession,

Stare into your crystal screens with frozen souls and silent screams,
He's marked you, and soon shall come,

So you better grab your crucifix,
And squeeze it so hard it draws blood from your palms,
Cause I bet you took that Sunday fix,
As tempting as it was who could ever resist?
Bow down in awe before this twisted son of man,
He's watching always, yes he is,
Media inspired nightmare dreamscapes have come true,
Share holders raise glass to the gods,

Run, run, run, cause the fabrics come undone,
With the setting of the sun, we're all going down,
So everybody run cause the end's about to come,
Soon the fabricated son will be knocking at your door,
They synthesized our own demise in the image of a desecrated saviour,
So hypnotized by this disguise, on and on his slaves are lined up for confession,

Watch their puppet work his spells and speak in tongues that reek of Hell,
Their bars and chains are wearing thin,
Broadcast live across the screens, this tragic end to corporate dreams,
Unleash the hatred of all mankind,

Run, run, run like little ants we run,
Running from the fire falling down from the sky,

Run, run, run from the hand of Christ we run,
He's laughing as the tears of blood pour down from his eyes,

Life turned to ash as he scatters the dust,
We gave into greed and we caved into lust,
He died for our sins so they burned us with trust,

Life turned to ash as he scatters the dust,
We gave into greed and we caved into lust,
He died for our sins so they burned us with trust and promises.

Reviews


nunyabiznessnunyabizness

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Really Good Work

A couple of things to note, one...I seldom give 10s unless it blows my hair back and can't stop hearing it....doesn't happen often...
But more importantly this song:
1 The music is well executed. Next time you record try turning your mic up more and singing/playing a little louder...it will help eliminate that muffled sound...you will be limited by your mic though...
2. Nice job on the harmonics, they add a lot of soul
3. Turn your vocals up about another 2 dB, especially from 4 minutes on...

Most of these remarks are more on the quality of your tone than the song. I can't knock the song itself much. Sounds like you could get by in a club playing it. Keep up the good work and when you get time be sure to check out our new song.....rock on!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/395087



DomoDomo

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Snap

When I first heard the beginning and thought. This is going to be boring, but then when the gutair started playing I was like shit this is going to rock. But then one thing I didn't expect was the lyrics. Not many songs on NG have lyrics and the ones hat do aren't good lyric songs. But this one was great lyrics and a great song.

All of it was good, the guitar and the lyrics. I liked how some parts had soft guitar parts then some really rocking parts. And the lyrics were really great. And I mean really really great. I was surprised at first. I thought there was no way a song like this could have lyrics this good. This could be the real deal. If I was a talent agent I would think about making this into something.

A very nice song and perfect in almost every way. The ending was fabulous. Nothing really bad I can say about the song.

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SeeD419SeeD419

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Oh...real music, lol...

Well, it's not really my thing, and it kinda upsets me that you used the genre "heavy metal" because this really is NOT metal to me at all...The guitars weren't distorted enough and there was NO screaming. To me, that's just a rock song. HOWEVER, it's obvious that a lot of effort was put into this, and I totally respect that.

The band seems to blend together really well, and I think you did a fantastic job mixing the instruments. The vocals are okay, and I think the song got much better at about 4:00. The guitar seemed punchy and the vocals were cool, but then after that part it sounded like a punk song all the sudden....



SequencedSequenced

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Classic Tune

This song has everything a heavy metal track needs. Epic guitar riffs, good percussion rhythm and good arrangement. Really nice done.

One thing I'd like to point out is that your vocals are not in the foreground. It's behind the mix and I really wanted to hear the lyrics a bit more clearer. Also, the kick could have a bit more punch to it. Maybe add a stronger compression on it? You need to hear the kick man, especially for those double kick rolls.

Excellent job though, you rarely find any good heavy metal tracks on here. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to hear more from you :)

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