if this was recorded
on a recording scale of say.. DarkSidE555 or Bad-Man-Inc I think it could be super epic - but your so-so recording sound is dragging it down - so a lot of the impact and effect is lost of the rawness of this submission. I would enjoy seeing this remastered to sound epicly sweet - if you want good mentors - those 2 - along with gorebastard and jarrydn are great resources for improvement :)
Great beat, great use of instruments, and good length. Great song. One of the coolest melodies I've heard in a while. Only reason it's a 9 is that it gets a little repetitive. Keep up the good work, can't wait to hear what you make next.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.