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i marked it as trance cuz thats the closest genre i think, anyway enjoy :D (its a hardstyle track if you don't like it leave please, don't give a bad review). btw this is hella diferent than the wip :D :D :D :D.

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Generic and repetitive.

I'm not sure what genre it is, but either way, it's not a very original piece.

What an asshat that previous reviewer was. Jesus christ...

Anyway, I'll try to explain why this song doesn't really do it for me. The main problem I have is the oh-so-over-used sounds you used. The synths, with their slight buzz, and the different rhythmic samples, were all very generic, and something I hear in pretty much all of the techno songs out there.

A second problem is the rhythm. It's highly generic, and the samples used in the drums are absolutely horrifying at times.

The song is highly repetitive. Sure, you change it up from time to time, but not very much. And even when you change it up, you let it go on in that new track for too long.

There's also very little bass in this song. You've used the drums to make a bass, and this one buzz, but you need to build up the melody. Right now it sounds very shallow, like there's nothing to back up the melody.

The ending was okay, it was a bit sudden, and I can't say I found much of a climax in the song, which I usually look for. If you improve on the things I've written now, you should be able to make some better songs. But remember, creativity is key. Experiment!

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BLARGH!

I can truely say "My ears are Bleeding." only a score of 1 because it isn't "Genius" Repeated over and over.

jpgregorio responds:

Well, if you don't like it and are not gonna help me improve then why waste your time reviewing? the review space is to help people improve, not for asshats have their fun.

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Uploaded
Jul 31, 2010
4:15 PM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
5.4 MB
4 min 46 sec

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