Okay piano...
Your choir is too loud and end gets a bit messy... but you need to add percussion...
I created this in the midst of learning to play the piano. The intro is a direct rip of a short melody I learned to play on the piano, experimented with some backup vocals. I was beginning to learn how a descending and ascending scale can create a good harmony, and as a result, I created this song.
Okay piano...
Your choir is too loud and end gets a bit messy... but you need to add percussion...
There is a version of this with percussion, but I feel that the percussion was too heavy and ruined the solace of the song. Thank you for your feedback.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.