A loop nonetheless, but the sounds are very bland and are very direct. No effects are applied, and effects give the sounds quality and an attitude. I think the biggest improvement needed is effects. Once you really learn how to manipulate and use effects this loop can become 10x better.
I like how you started out sorta dark and quiet and then didn't kill the mood like most people do. 9/10 in my review and a 4/5 in my rating.