Good

You know why this is good? I'll tell you why, because it's different than most of the generic crap that is on this site. It's not a bad different, but a good different.

creative

first off 9/10 cuz nothing is perfect unless its got everything.
i was expecting some sad since the words "death bed" is in it.then this music appears and it blew my mind... It really got me hooked into the whole song but one thing, you could make the song kinda relate to your title again the whole Death Bed thing was a bit making me think of sad not whatever genra this is, but nice work man.

Nice

I agree with IIPhase. A little deeper of a sound would've been cool, but I still like it nonetheless. i had it on a loop for quite a while. Easy to listen to, but still has a lot to it. Keep up the good work. Xb

Very good

But for this kind of song i would change te basskick. Add more bass into it!
And try to get a substitute for the flslayer sound.
Melodies are good but still a bit chaotic that doesn't have to be a bad thing but then it would need a bassline ore strong percussion that is very recognizable so that the ears can fall back to it. and be supported.
It is fresh and new and you picked a good genre!
8/10 5/5

Good Job

Nice

I approve of this