Why "miscellaneous"?
Great work so far, can't wait to hear the final product! Hm.. can't really think of anything I could criticize - good, catchy melody, very original.
Though, one thing I would suggest is putting this in a certain category.. (it has a trance feel to it.., maybe put it in trance?). The firs time I saw this I almost didn't listen to it just because I sometimes make assumptions based on the genre category it's placed in, and there usually aren't many solid songs from miscellaneous (no offense to anyone.) So yeah, other than that, can't point anything out. Great stuff man :)
Good luck with the rest!