Calm suspense
I like what you have done here. Though it feels more like a suspense moment in a movie than the dance/house feel you mentioned. Don't get me wrong I like it the way it is now, the dark/spooky pad, the classic piano and nice drums all flow together quite nicely. The original is one of my favourites too and I'm glad you decided not to take the generic dance-remix road most remixes take. A job well done!