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Hey NG,
This is my 4th song I've submitted here I do believe. Uh... I worked on it for a friend. She liked it enough to persuade me posting it here. Hope you all enjoy it as much as she did.

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So I sit back in my chais, and listen to this little piece work its way to fulfillment.

The intro is cool, and the transition to the first hit is very nice. I'm not sure what I think about it going quiet again and leading to the big hit a second time. It is kinda wasted space there.

I like the section starting around the 1:20 mark. And when your pad comes in around 1:30, it gives a nice color to the overall sound. Although I think there could be more there. Seems a little transparent.

I like how you have things fade in and fade out in your song. Something I need to do more in my own work in Fruity Loops. You do it very well, and tastefully.

I like the overall sound and structure in the section beginning around the 2:35ish mark. Very full sound there. I love the sound at 3:12, the one all by itself. Very fucking cool there man.

I will say though, this song should probably be a lot shorter. So far it is pretty cool, but I'm losing interest. It repeats a lot, an awful lot. At least it sounds like it does. So you should try compacting it a bit. Normally I'm telling people to expand, but this song needs the exact opposite.

Now you could expand vertically to help this song. It is very transparent in many areas. But nifty song really.

4/5 and 8/10 overall. Mainly the reason it is not a 9/10 is it's length. I couldn't sit through the whole thing. It doesn't vary nearly enough musically to constitute being so long. But a good solid song nonetheless.

Good luck on your future projects bud!


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Jan 20, 2009
1:14 PM EST
File Info
7.5 MB
8 min 11 sec

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