cool

interresting. starts off sounding kinda ambiant
none the less, great song i love it. continue to make more. your talent will go far \m/ !!

very good but...

try to make ur melody flow into faster synth if u have plastics it works great

Great Start

You reviewed some of my work, so now I thought I'd return the favor! I noticed one of the people who left reviews complained that your sound was fuzzy- it's possibly because of the file size at which you had to export it to Newgrounds. As for me, I do hear the fuzz, but I can also hear what's behind it. Great job on use of synths. Your beat does need some work. All I hear in there is the combination of the 4/4 kick beat and the hats. While it's good that you're able to construct a beat that's consistent with your melodies, you need more. A good beat should not only be consistent, but should compliment a piece- almost in a call-and-response format. Plus, you gotta have energy in your piece- and the drum line's a good place to draw from for that. Add some breaks where you feel they should go, and just experiment. Good luck!

not too shabby

dimrain47 rocks butt

Not bad

But you should make an effort to make it faster - it does not always mean to pump up the tempo but simply how you place your notes. But you deffinetly have potential, keep working :) !