I'll bet with practice you'll get better...
I gave you a three... I have decided to give you a helpful (In my opinion) review. Your song was fuzzy and very unclear, which is why you got so low in clarity. Diversity, was pretty good, although the 4 by 4 drum beat dragged on over and over forever without change. It was different throught the song, but always sounded fuzzy, and no offense but, boring. For effort, it sounded half assed... When you try on something it shows.
Well I'd have to say the reason it sounded fuzzy was becuase of the medium. It sounds clear on my my hardrive, Anywayz am gonna try hard on currrently working on a remix and I'll try to mix it up a bit more