ya, i hate offset stuff...

holy shit- you took something i thought was gonna be another game soundtrack song- and blew it away- just something personal, i think releasing work that isn't complete is very unprofessional. dnb- dude this song is i think gonna go on my next playlist on my ipod-- love the part after the drums break off and then come back in- cool! great drums, don't know about the distortion though. there you go clean drums, you know whatsup i take back the distortion commetn- you got a handle on what you want to do- once this song is finished , its gonna bee crazy. like the effect you threw in there the whoop whoop whoop thing haha. nice bass too- i bit too light for my taste , but again its not finished- it sounds like the bass is all distortion and no depth, like you put an eq on it or something. this is really out there and good luck!

-DJOXYGEN-

The strings are a bit offset.

Otherwise, it's a really good track, and DEFINITELY AIN'T MAINSTREAM. :D