awesome

this is the best hardcore song :D

Good quality stuff

To be honest I never thought rap would fit hardcore for almost the whole piece. But it did and I loved every bit of it.

[Intro]
Nice start with those rides, nice fast paced. :D
Loving those kicks for the intro, but you had to change it in a deep pounding one at the main piece. It was a bit to harsh and distorted, it's also the kick I hear in every of your hardcore tracks. I can make you a good hardcore kick if you'd like.

[Build]:
Loving those lyrics lol from lil wayne and birdman. Nice transitioning towards it.

[Main]:
God I love that piano! and those clapping are really epic! Same as how you frequenced that melody, damn! So swift! I must say this one fitted quite good for this track. I also see you've changed it a tad, and must say in a good way. It's more energetic and cleaner, fitted good!

[Build-off towards end]:
Fast transitioning man lol, clean and nice. Though I loved a slow one there, it's just a tad too abdrupt. Since this track has allot of soothing and calming bits it also has some really fast spaced pieces inbetween, I must you say you combined it really good.

As far it goes for originality; a new kick/bass.
Structure: Well done, only keep an eye out for the transitioning.
Quality: 100% perfect, no clippings whatsoever.

Good luck on your further progress.
5/5 10/10

-Ian

Ps: Next time we should start an new collab and share the flp over and over, and see what comes out. ;) Let those 2 styles mix inbetween I am eagerly to know how it would come out. :D