I know this is not done, however, I think the voice obviously needs improvement. No expression =Þ. Overly repetitive as well, but only at the beginning...obviously.
It needs more instruments and more melodies added to it. A lot of room for improvement, but this could definitely be made into something. Personally, I liked the techno lead that repeats throughout most of the song...but it needs more instruments to back it up!
I hope you do a good job with this this song, I understand that it's not done, but it doesn't deserve to be rated on top of all the techno section in its current state.
However, it has enough drama and tempo changes, and whatnot. That voice has no drama though. I can't tell if you used a machine to make it or you did it yourself, but you need to do something to it, it sounds like a guy went up to a microphone and didn't really feel like singing that day. Very un-enthusiastic sounding voice.
This can go somewhere though, good luck on the creation!
I`m not generally a hardcore fan but I like what I hear in this, some cool fx and panning, the crowds seem a bit on the weak side and don`t really seem excited but thats a small thing, really dig the arp melody`s later in the track and the backing sounds fill it nicely. Nice work.
Thanks! I'm glad that you appreciate the panning effects, I think you're the first. I thought the crowds sounded excited enough, maybe they just weren't loud enough. I'm glad that you like the melody, because for a long time I was concerned that it wouldn't be strong enough, and I'm also glad that you found the backing sounds worked well, because that was another area I was concerned about.
I really appreciate your very constructive comment!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.