I know this is not done, however, I think the voice obviously needs improvement. No expression =Þ. Overly repetitive as well, but only at the beginning...obviously.
It needs more instruments and more melodies added to it. A lot of room for improvement, but this could definitely be made into something. Personally, I liked the techno lead that repeats throughout most of the song...but it needs more instruments to back it up!
I hope you do a good job with this this song, I understand that it's not done, but it doesn't deserve to be rated on top of all the techno section in its current state.
However, it has enough drama and tempo changes, and whatnot. That voice has no drama though. I can't tell if you used a machine to make it or you did it yourself, but you need to do something to it, it sounds like a guy went up to a microphone and didn't really feel like singing that day. Very un-enthusiastic sounding voice.
This can go somewhere though, good luck on the creation!