Strange and a little sad

I think that sadly, from the start that you presented to the piece, it was a little too big of a buildup and when it dropped to this sadly slightly one dimensional piece, it didn't sound as good as I had hoped.

With the way that the "1990s ringtone" sound got rather irritating pretty quickly, even with the beat behind it, I feel that you were on a hiding to nothing. The beat wasn't exactly anything out of the ordinary, so you really need to consider what you're aiming for and really go for it, since this tune isn't quite right at present.

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Beeping sound is annoying

The beeping sound gets really annoying after a while and it repeats the same melody over and over again. The only thing that really changes are the drums, but they only play a very simple beat, so there's nothing here that makes me want to listen to the song again (and again... and again).

So I think you should cut down on the beeping sound and introduce some other sounds instead. Also the drums should play a more varied riff.

Also the intro is kind of weird. I would expect to see and hear that in a flash, but in an audio submission? Feels kinda misplaced here.

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