Wazz Cookin
cool sh!# u got here ...
i like,,,
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original song is by ace hood
this is just a freestyle. shit wasn't wrote down. Its the first take. which means i didnt do any editing.
i dunno y im puttin it on newgrounds, maybe ya'll like it and i can make it a song when i put some time into it
im not expecting anything from this but let me know what you think
if you think i can do sumthin wit it let me know
Nice
I Love it
twickz responds:
thank yas
Pretty Good
This is newer sense of music, not all hip-hop not all R&B either but a good mixture. I credit the original song to ace hood he done a good job. I've got a suggestions that you could do, the song is all going flow but slowly you could do things like slow it down for a few seconds and then speed it up instantly afterwards so it sound could sound like it is phasing out but then coming back into its rhythm. What you could also do is edit the vocals a bit, sounds a bit too high (for my taste but thats just my opinion). You can also add a little bit more bass, it sounds too light at times and sometimes the bass comes in late (i dont mean make it all bass but just add a little more). Anyways thats all my suggestions for now, if i get anymore ideas i'll pm you. Great work and Good luck for making the song better, and good luck for newer songs if you've got any in mind which you'll release for us on NG.
yooo
Shit aint bad homie, keep at it.
kool
feeling it dog
twickz responds:
thanks man im thinkin aboiut finishin this. and puttin sometime into it what u think?
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