Even with the crappy music equipment, I still think this song's instrumentals are better than Lil Wayne's version
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yo I take alot of pride in this one, This is what im goin thru wit my girl right now. so thats why i put so much effort in this one. you know after so long you just couldnt magine life without that person n this is what this track is about. Thanks for any reviews and i hope ya'll take this one to the top!!!
First this song's quality isnt very good i know this. my recording equipment is pretty shitty, my computer is old as shit. but all that put aside i'd like to hear what some of you got to say about this song i made!
songs about ya girl leavin you.
:lyrics
chorus
She leavin, she leavin
there aint nothin that i can say
she leavin she leavin
im just watchin her walk away
dont you go, dont you leave
dont you know, that i need
dont you know i need you
dont you go dont you leave
dont you know i fiene
dont you know i fiene...fo youuu
:first verse
now shawty on my mind all the time n i feel like shes leavin
i wish that i could rewind time so i could go back n see the reasons.
i suffocate when shes not around n its hard for me to keep on breathin
my heart flatlines when you gone, the only reason it keeps on beating
:bridge
she about to leave it all, she got her bags packed
i used to be standin tall, n now im standin half
the size i used to be, n all theses memories
i thought she was my queen, i thought i was her king
:chorusx1
Verse 2
Now shawty say she calls it quits
shawty say she thru wit this
you can even take the crib
you can even keep the whip
i cant take ya shit
everytime you make me sick
we playin battle ships
and everytime i take ya hits
im sinkin to the bottom of the flo n i cant take it no mo'
n now its sinkin in, i wont see her again, i wont see her tomarrow
bride#2
chorus#3
If you dont like r & b please dont vote
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This is tight
i really think if you have the time maybe you could re-record. I think it would sound even more professional. I really feel this song, and im in need for some r&b. I really like the lyrics, and the phrasing just makes it more intense and real. Really excellent job. Keep it real. 10/10 5/5
twickz responds:
yeah i wish i could get into some booths to record instead of a shitty comp with a broke ass mic.. ya dig?? lol
whoa!
2 b honest i thought this song would suck (no offense) but when i heard it i was pleasantly surprised so good job
twickz responds:
thanks im glad you thought it didnt suck
very gooooooooooooooood
you are the front runner ................ cooool ( keep it go )
yooo
this here needss a nice grimcredible/mackyty verse on it xD we're wrkin on a tape for our soft trakcsss soo look out for dat. u on it... might add some spice to macks DEEP "Spectacular" voice.
twickz responds:
hell chyea! im down
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