I would really apprieciate helpful reviews on what I could do to greatly improve it. Seeing as I'm quite the newbie in the audio "industry". I will understand if you do not like it. seeing as it probably needs improvement. I'm just warning you in advance seeing as some people on this site give annoying and awful reasons on why I shouldn't continue making techno. So anyways, enjoy! :)
4/5 8/10
Pretty cool song. You need to flow between the different parts of your song better and try and get a bass that is more bassy. I really like the pop bass, but you need to at some point bring in a real bass. Remember, bass makes people move, and with a techno song, that is what you want.
Thanks for the review. I will take your advice and make sure I add more of a "kick".
Thanks again man. peace.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
tjbeans 
Digitax25 
JVNOfficial 
