the beat ruins it for me :S
its 2 pitched...the toxic presets are good...and i understand ure new...so ill go lightly on u...
u shud use more variation on ure upcoming track :)
add in a some more synths and fx....play around with automation mabye...( dunno if its 2 soon for u ) but dun hold back ure imagination is the limit :P
so yea finish this track and msg me about it ^^
u shud add more of a beat to it and play around with the EQ its important rly =]
u get a 8.....ure new and i understand...^^
oh im trying 2 get ppl 2 listen 2 this song...cud u listen 2 it too?
and review it :D
peace out DrX