DUDE!
I will be very sad if you don't at least finish the song!! Full 4-5 minutes for this one! It could be something very epic!
Of course you need the main song so I wont comment on that.
True what TomsMusic said, Get a MUCH bigger Kick, like something that is on the verge of being obnoxious! That's what is good for this!
Otherwise, AWESOME!