i liked the drums at the beginning. it's a little slow for my taste, if it was sped up just a little bit more(not too much, just a little), it would be perfect. the melody is amazing, it's pretty relaxing, but again, a little slow for my preference. but i'm not going to rate it based on my preference, i'm going to rate it based on how well-made it is. my advice would be to double it's length, and see if you can maybe find someone to sing on it. good song bro. keep it up.
thanks man i really appreciate it and its not complete but will be soon ive been working a lot on this song. ill try speeding it up a little too and seeing how that sounds thanks for the review man i appreciate it.