ehhm... okay.

u just overwhelmed the bass :( the bass leads the whole song, not the melody, it fades down behind the bass, as everything in the song does when the bass is in there.
but u made nice melodies here. u just would tune down the bass so we can hear them better :)
also the crashes there are such... badly mixed on some places, too quiet or too loud.

but overall, i liked it, kinda, u just need to watch some places to fix!

but just keep it up :)

ps: don't be happy when zerobombers find u, they're everywhere :(

Not bad at all!

The melody is very cool, but it's all overwhelmed by the bass, that's why i really liked the part from 1:40 and 3:10 where the bass goes off, that's why i don't give you a '10'