emotional

The good:
Good use of those strings, sound really emotional. (0+10=10)

How to improve:
-add reverb to all instruments for a more live played feeling (10-1=9)
-drums sound a bit unreal, you could try to put some tape distortion on it. (9-1=8)
-everything sounds a bit unrythmic, like you've not played with metronome (8-1=7)
-ending is abrupt (7-1=6)

Not bad though,

3/5, 6/10