thise one was shorter as the others but still good
Music free, text/vocals by me.
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I don't wish to be a minimal MC
I want to spit out rhymes greater than NYC
That you can both read and feed on through years decades and eons
And they never seize they keep on they be
Playing and portraying all the things I feel and think
Sometime comes the silence, but in a single a blink
The sound will strike back with unpredicted violence
Striking down like great tidal waves upon both steady soil and islands
When you hear my music, you're in my land
Governed by me with my laws, I command
Every movement every stop, when resuming
You'll go with the flow of the tunes in my music
I lose track of time when I sit back and rhyme
When I'm strictly inspired it doesn't stop at just one line
It keeps going onward with words of a new dawn worth
Much more than you will ever earn since your drawn birth
thise one was shorter as the others but still good
Thanks man. There do be some really short ones way back when...
Wow nice
Wow now this was dang good I knew you had some potential but with this track you really pushed the limmits and the voice comes off good you have a nice beat in the backround to really make it like a song also love that its not a short little clip but more of a song here, Now I could see you advancing on this with adding some drops and building up the backround sound to the wording but really was a nice piece and even though its a tad dated still has some good quality about it so really nice job indeed so please do keep it up.
~X~
Can't wait till you get to some of my newer ones. XD Glad you liked this though! Old but go... ing to keep going fo rizzle. Newer and better. Truant forever.
Pretty good
I like it but a song like this needs a faster pace
Thanks, might make a fastpaced version of this later then, would be interesting to see how it turns out.
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